[Self] Feedback on video needed

[Black Knight]

I need some brutally honest feedback on whether this video is any good or not.  It's promoting an energy drink.

The main question is: did it make you laugh at all?  

Followed by: would you send it to a friend?


Here's the link:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HyTXthn8OPo

Thanks for your help in advance.

BK

[altpersona]

funny : 3 of 10

friend: not likely

needs better camera, acting, dialog. otherwise production looks good.

EDIT: its toooo long also. I would keep it under a minute.