Alright, I'm leaving it in. The episode will be released on our normal schedule- Sunday.
I think my main concern was that it was so non-sequitor and crossed the line from being funny sexual to a bit graphic sexual. It's absolutely though the type of thing I'd just say when hanging out (and definitely not the type of thing I'd ever say at work), so it's me and natural. But I don't want to have comments that will blur the rest of the episode. It's like Serenity-- my main concern with Wash's death is that at the time, that was all anyone could talk about with the movie. After I came out of mourning, I realized that yes, the death did its job in terms of setting the stage for what a clusterfuck the situation was, but it overwhelmed the rest of the movie to a point too.
I think that's where I'd want to draw a line from a director/producer point of view. No one thing should be so extreme that the whole hour could be summed into "OMG, When Josh compared Indianapolis with Vagina, that was so funny!" I want moments of shock to be interspersed with information- so it could be "The description of Aces and Eights was great, and I loved the description of a Stoplight Speech and omg, when Josh compared Indy with vag, that was hilarious!"
And on that...
Question 2) When we have a cool idea, what do you think about us having a WS mini-description in the midst of our (usually) NSFW full out description? I ask this because of DragonSnack's comment about the Stoplight speech-- the idea of a stoplight speech is a really good one and essential for proper marketing, and it is traditionally called an "Elevator Speech" but we gave it a dirty twist. I think if we had been more clear about "You could also call it an Elevator Speech if you were in mixed company" then the issue DS had may not have come up.
I don't want to be seen as pandering, but I think the highlight of our show is #1 Good advice and #2 funnies. I don't want the #2 to detract from the #1 either.
Thoughts?