I've e-mailed you a draft Zeke.
It's the version that I submitted for a writing class about a year ago. It's 'good', since somehow when the professor read the revision, the paper's mark jumped 20 points the second time around. I'm just not happy with certain parts of it.
I'm working on making the introduction more clear and more focused. The rest of the paper might need work, but the intro was what always bugged me. Tell me what you think. Also, yes, you will have to chop this thing into chapters. I submitted a much longer paper than was asked for, but the reason it was accepted was that I needed to draw upon a diverse array of historical supporting material to make one of the key arguments work (or rather, I keep telling myself that).
I might try and dig up my old "Rules for playing Magical Tea-Party" if I can recover the files from my HDD. Hopefully I'll be able get around to that sometime this weekend.
If I'm really lucky, I'll maybe even be able to go out and meet some of my friends, that I've been neglecting for the past.... beginning of the semester, some time this week. Never get into anything time-intensive for study, like engineering, 3D animation, art, physics or chemistry. It's hell on your social life. The humanities majors can at least afford the time to go away for a weekend.
