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Zeke

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New Cohort article 11/8/08
« on: November 08, 2008, 12:03:35 PM »
This is the first of three installments of an article entitled The Horrible Radius, by Judgingeagle. Like any good essay, this introductory portion lets us know what we will be reading about. It also humorously looks at the role of the "simple character" and the pitfalls related to that experience.

http://brilliantgameologists.com/cohort/?p=13 :debate
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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2008, 03:34:07 PM »
Well, at least my instructor's suggestion to get this published in some manner is now followed.

Thanks for putting it up.
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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2008, 12:35:42 AM »
It seems really interesting so far.

I'm waiting for the other parts now.

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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #3 on: November 12, 2008, 12:52:42 PM »
Thanks Dan,

I should give fair warning that it tries to cover a lot of ground, and as such tends to ramble.
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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #4 on: November 12, 2008, 04:32:27 PM »
As someone who teaches the three part essay frquently, I found it relatively self contained and concise.

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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2008, 11:24:26 PM »
That's true, I just wish that I had tightened it up more. A lesson for an other paper.
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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #6 on: November 13, 2008, 12:30:04 AM »
*looks at*

I am so not going to be able to make anything short enough for cohort. :p

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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #7 on: November 13, 2008, 12:45:39 AM »
Well written, JE. I'm looking forward to the next installments.

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Re: New Cohort article 11/8/08
« Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 02:35:16 PM »
Part two is up, I am upping the schedule and will put out part three this weekend.

http://brilliantgameologists.com/cohort/?p=14