I wrote
this thing, and while I've sworn off editing it for a while since I submitted it to be possibly front-paged (unless shit breaks; if there are broken images or crap like that, I doubly appreciate being told about it and you'll probably get an explicit thank you, maybe), I'd appreciate any comments (read: tell me why I'm a shitty writer, it'll help me in the long run).
I'm currently afraid (especially since somebody mentioned it already, elsewhere) that the article is overly masturbatory (not LITERALLY, obviously, unless you're really into blocky 3D architecture and chicks in plate mail), but I'm also wondering if that direction wasn't inevitable given Cracked-style over-the-topness that I was trying to emulate.
Also I apparently love parentheses, but that's neither here nor there. Well, it's here, but I don't think it's there so much.
